Zosia Law - WIP

Zosia Law - WIP
Discussion in 'Creation' started by Zosia, Feb 27, 2018.
  1. Character

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    Zosia Law

    Race:Human
    Age:19
    Sex:Female

    Sexuality:Straight
    Relationship:Single

    Height: 5'9"
    Build: Slim + Lean

    Player

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    Thyme Mihimi

    Nationality:American
    Age:20
    Sex:Male

    Sexuality:Homosexual
    Relationship:Single

    Height: 5'10"
    Build: Skinny + Long



    Personality

    While not playing the game, he seems to be the type to keep things to himself while looking out for himself. He doesn't have many friends or anything, but he tries to be supportive as much as he could or at least he tries to be. Thyme is quite kind, even for his own good. Though he's smart enough to not let others, take it as his weakness. He doesn't like it when most people, would use it towards there advantage and get whatever they want. Thyme is quite fun if he wants to be and, tries to get out of his comfort zone as much as possible. Though it can take time, as he isn't used to it yet.

    it's always safe to keep a separate personality and mix them up quite a bit. Differing from his actual personality and, his in-game personality. Though they're all not negative traits of his. Thyme can be uncooperative and, doesn't favor teams that much as he sees people can bring him down. Unable for him to bring out his best. Thyme can be too laid back for his own good and, doesn't watch his back as much as he should. When he's at his best, he shows his ruthless behavior that can frighten some players who aren't used to these things. When he's in one spot, thyme can get fidgety. As being in one place for too long will eventually want to wander off and walk around for a bit.

    Positive: Supportive, Fun, Kind, Loyal
    Negative: Uncooperative, Too laid back, ruthless, fidgety


    Biography

    Before knowing about the game and, ever learning about its existence. Thyme never or rarely shares himself with his existence of the world, as he seems to be the type to close himself off from society. He's an introvert at best and, always keeping stuff to himself. Thyme didn't have much, but his families support and money that can keep him in school, and pursue whatever dream he had at the time. Thyme was mostly into a bunch of tech stuff, like his father. Considering his father works as an employee on this game that everyone will soon to be boasting about it, as he's heard rumors about something new and great coming soon. He wasn't really big on video games, but he's always interested in getting his hands on something new. Things that make people talk about it a lot, will eventually catch thymes attention sooner or later. His mother happens to be a teacher, at a school that he frequently goes to.

    Merely several months, on thymes 18th birthday. An anonymous message was sent from his computer, on that one fateful night. He wasn't sure what it was. Thinking too much of it, would be a waste of time. Thyme would set foot onto this mysterious journey, mysterious to himself at the least. Guessing he would enjoy this ride.



    Out of Character

    Played by: @Minx
    Player tag: @Zosia

    (Darling In The Franxx) Zero two
    (Gatchaman Crowds) Rui Ninomiya

    Mastery: Martial Arts, Acrobatic, Black Magic
    Vocations: Investigation, theatrics

     
    Last edited: Mar 1, 2018
  2. Curved Swords

    Curved Swords

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    Hey there Minx! I’ve looked over your application, and it’s looking pretty good. However, there are a few small issues I’d like to bring to your attention before it can be accepted. The most important thing is that your account’s name must match your in-game character’s name 1-to-1, including the last name. If you’d like to keep the full name, please contact Asch so he can change your account’s name. Otherwise, you’ll have to remove the extra parts from your in-game character’s name.

    Aside from that, there’s a few minor grammatical errors, such as misplaced commas or lack of capitalization. This isn’t too important, but it would make it easier to read your application if you could look over it one more time and make adjustments. If you’re having trouble with that, you can always use an online grammar checker.

    One last thing in regards to your biography. In terms of lore, having Thyme’s dad gift him the game doesn’t really work. The game’s origin is purposefully meant to be mysterious, so having his father be one of the developers of Terrasphere takes away from that element. Please take a look at the wiki if this is still unclear.

    Let me know if you’ve got any questions!
     
  3. Grammer checkers aren't all free, and I have one in my keyboard. And for the name part, sure guess you can change it.
     
  4. Human Resources

    Human Resources

    Staff Member
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    Hi there, Minx! I'm afraid that your application still doesn't meet our requirements as you have yet to fix the things that Ace pointed out in the above post. You will need to:
    • Fix your grammar.
    • Remove any mentions of his father having worked on or in connection with the game.
    • Contact @Asch in order to have your account name changed.
    Please let us know when you have fixed these issues!